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Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 6:59 am

On stardate 65615.09562841547 The U.S.S Enterprize F had met up with the Romulan and Klingon flagships and were just about to beam them aboard for both of them to say to Admiral Picard why the Federation should support them in the close Klingon/Romulan war.

''Chanceller Martok of the klingonss and praetor Hiren of the Romulans are ready to beam aboard'' said Ensign O'Brian
''Then by all means beam them both aboard ensign'' said Admiral Picard

(1 minute later both the chanceller and the praetor were beamed aboard the Enterprise)

''GOOD TO SEE YA PICARD'' yelled Chanceller Martok
''greetings Admiral may we get down to business'' said Praetor Hiren
''certainly if you will both follow me to the conference room'' said Picard

(After a awkward silence they arrived on the bridge)

''ahh it has been a long time since i was on a Federation ship'' said Chanceller Martok
''If you will both follow me into the conference room, Janeway will you join me'' said Admiral Picard
''If you would all sit down please'' said Captain Janeway
''Ok both of you need to state your case why the Federation should help you in the war would you start chancellor Martok'' said Picard
''certainly pick the klingons we are great warriors and more in number and with our cloaking devices we are a lethal foe and a great ally and relationships between us and the Federation are deeper than the ROMULAN SCUM'' Declared Martok
''WHY DONT YOU BE QUITE YOU KLINGON SAVAGE YOU RACE WOULD'NT EVEN BE SPACE WORTHY IF YOU DIDNT STEAL TECHNOLOGY'' shouted Praetor Hiren
'' YOU ROMULAN PI'TAK DIE'' shouted Chanceller Martok

(At that moment Chanceller Martok drew a hidden knife and attacked Praetor Hiren but Praetor Hiren then drew a phaser and shot Martok)

''AHHH y..you Romulan...scum....Picard war has been declared with my death....choose the Klingons and help the Empire kill these scum'' said Martok (dies)
''He tried to kill me a had no choice'' said Praetor Hiren
''GOT OFF MY SHIP YOU MURDERING ROMULAN'' Shouted Picard
''Fine but choosing the Klingons is a grave mistake'' said Praetor Hiren

(Praetor Hiren suddenly beamed back to his ship)

''sir the romulan vessels have rasied and are powering weapons'' said lieutenant commander tuvok
''RAISE SHIELDS, POWER UP PHASERS AND ARM TOPEDO BAYS''ordered Admiral Picard
''Tuvok hail the klingon vessel'' shouted Captain Janeway
''yes captain....they are responding said lieutenant commander Tuvok
''WE KNOW WHY YOU HAIL US LET US FIGHT THE ROMULAN SCUM!''shouted the new klingon Captain
''Sir the Romulans are firing (ship shakes on impact) shields down to 93%'' said lieutenant Archer
'' FIRE PHASER AND AND LAUNCH 3 TOPEDOES'' Shouted Picard
''siir the klingon vessel is firing 13 torpedoes and fireing phasers.....The Romulan shields are weakening'' said Lieutenant commander Tuvok
''Admiral 2 more Romulan warbirds are decloaking'' said Lieutenant Archer
''4 more Klingon neg'war warships are decloaking....they are all firing 21 torpedoes and phasers at 1 klingon ships.....we are being hailed by the under fire klingon ship'' said Lieutenant Commander Tuvok
''Ahhh.....The Romulan scum and attacking my ship alone help us'' Demanded the new Klingon captain
''Admiral 1 of the klingon vessels has been destroyed shall i fire at the Romulans?'' said Lieutenant Commander tuvok

(to be continued.......sorry for cliff hanger tell me what ya think


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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Genix on Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:02 am

You do know you didn't need a new thread, you could have just edited your post
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:20 am

oh i didnt know sorry
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Grevus on Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:48 am

hmm.. i dont think picard would say 'romulan scum'
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:50 am

well he was seriously mad you know how picard hates people killing people on his ship it makes him seriously mad
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Grevus on Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:51 am

yeh but he wouldnt say 'scum'
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:53 am

.......yea you got a point ill edit it out and change it to something else
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Grevus on Sun Mar 13, 2011 8:03 am

thats better. much more life like
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 8:07 am

thanks also check out my RP corrupt a wish
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Caboose on Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:08 am

urgh...Fan wank.
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:24 am

what?
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Caboose on Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:26 am

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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:42 am

oh......ok
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Gamerang on Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:44 am

LOL
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 10:01 am

so can some tell me what they think instead of random stuff
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Caboose on Sun Mar 13, 2011 10:07 am

Well it's a Fan Wank, a Fan wank can never be good, not even Shakespeare could of made a good Fan wank. And he was the great Writer in the history of Writing things.
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 10:08 am

then i guess i should give up on this then :/
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Caboose on Sun Mar 13, 2011 10:15 am

Not really, just fix it.

Don't use people like Janeway, Tuvok, O'Brien, Ensign Archer, Picard, be original, also we have no back story to events that have happened before this meeting. we just know a war is gonna happen.

Also your ability to play a Klingon needs some serious work.
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 11:09 am

ok ill make a prequal to this explaining how the relations between klingons and Romulans became bitter and change the character names names

and also ensign Archer was original

i may post it today if it aint posted in a hour or 2 it will happen tomorrow
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Caboose on Sun Mar 13, 2011 11:11 am

Captain Archer.... From a little show called Enterprise, almost all your Characters are named after a Cannon one.
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 11:32 am

i never watched that series ill watch a few episodes to learn the characters
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Gamerang on Sun Mar 13, 2011 11:51 am

Enterprise was an awful series. It only looks good next to the animated series.
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by klingonking on Sun Mar 13, 2011 12:13 pm

I just watched a episode and ill have to agree.....but ill say i think the startrek writers were abit high when they thought of the animated series anyways back on topic tomorrow ill submit the prequal
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Caboose on Sun Mar 13, 2011 12:19 pm

What?
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Re: Star trek: Klingon/Romulan war(part 2)

Post by Gamerang on Sun Mar 13, 2011 12:24 pm

sequal my friend... not prequel
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