Star Trek: Omega Quest (Part 1)
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Star Trek: Omega Quest (Part 1)
Ok so I had an idea for this story. It is set in the year 2380. It is based on the crew of the USS Trojenhorse.
When the Trojenhorse encounters Romulan ships yielding Omega warheads they must investigate into who gave them the technology.
The USS Galactic is on it's way to Earth for repairs when it is attacked by a group of Romulan Valdors.
Captain: Raise Shields!
Lieutenant: I'm reading several ships.
Commander: Arm Photon Torpedos. Fire!
Lieutenant: Damage to there shields and weapons.
Captain: Target there engines.
Lieutenant: Shields down.
Commander: Get us out of hear now!
Lieutenant: Engines failing sir.
Captain: All hands abandon ship
[The crew make there way to the escape pods]
Commander: Starship coming in sir. It's the Trojenhorse.
Aboard the Trojenhorse.
Captain: Arm Quantum Torpedos and fire.
Ensign: 4 targets destroyed.
Commander: Great! Lets beam aboard survivers from the Galaactic,
Ensign: Sir theres a Romulan scout ship coming in.
Commander: Only a scout?
Ensign: Sir there arming some kind of weapon.
Lieuenant: I'm reading traces of the Omega particle.
Captain: Get us out of here now!
[Trojenhorse warps]
[USS Galactic destryoed]
Any questions please add bellow.
When the Trojenhorse encounters Romulan ships yielding Omega warheads they must investigate into who gave them the technology.
The USS Galactic is on it's way to Earth for repairs when it is attacked by a group of Romulan Valdors.
Captain: Raise Shields!
Lieutenant: I'm reading several ships.
Commander: Arm Photon Torpedos. Fire!
Lieutenant: Damage to there shields and weapons.
Captain: Target there engines.
Lieutenant: Shields down.
Commander: Get us out of hear now!
Lieutenant: Engines failing sir.
Captain: All hands abandon ship
[The crew make there way to the escape pods]
Commander: Starship coming in sir. It's the Trojenhorse.
Aboard the Trojenhorse.
Captain: Arm Quantum Torpedos and fire.
Ensign: 4 targets destroyed.
Commander: Great! Lets beam aboard survivers from the Galaactic,
Ensign: Sir theres a Romulan scout ship coming in.
Commander: Only a scout?
Ensign: Sir there arming some kind of weapon.
Lieuenant: I'm reading traces of the Omega particle.
Captain: Get us out of here now!
[Trojenhorse warps]
[USS Galactic destryoed]
Any questions please add bellow.
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Re: Star Trek: Omega Quest (Part 1)
woah make it longer
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Bravo! Make this a series and put it on TV!
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i dont think this will go to youtube nver mind the TV
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Re: Star Trek: Omega Quest (Part 1)
Empire wrote:Ok so I had an idea for this story. It is set in the year 2380. It is based on the crew of the USS Trojenhorse.
It's Spelt Trojan. And Ship names needs to be Italicized.
When the Trojenhorse encounters Romulan ships yielding Omega warheads they must investigate into who gave them the technology.
Omega... No, Just No. Omega is the destroyer of All Fan-boy Stories. And the Romulans aren't Smart enough Develop Omega War heads anyways.
The USS Galactic is on it's way to Earth for repairs when it is attacked by a group of Romulan Valdors.
Whats the Galactic?, for all we know it's a Starfleet passenger liner attacked by Norexen Warbrids
Captain: Raise Shields!
Lieutenant: I'm reading several ships.
Commander: Arm Photon Torpedos. Fire!
Lieutenant: Damage to there shields and weapons.
Captain: Target there engines.
Lieutenant: Shields down.
Commander: Get us out of hear now!
Lieutenant: Engines failing sir.
Captain: All hands abandon ship
[The crew make there way to the escape pods]
Commander: Starship coming in sir. It's the Trojenhorse.
Aboard the Trojenhorse.
Captain: Arm Quantum Torpedos and fire.
Ensign: 4 targets destroyed.
Commander: Great! Lets beam aboard survivers from the Galaactic,
Ensign: Sir theres a Romulan scout ship coming in.
Commander: Only a scout?
Ensign: Sir there arming some kind of weapon.
Lieuenant: I'm reading traces of the Omega particle.
Captain: Get us out of here now!
[Trojenhorse warps]
[USS Galactic destryoed]
This is a Script Not an Story.
Any questions please add bellow.
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Re: Star Trek: Omega Quest (Part 1)
KingSciFi wrote:Bravo! Make this a series and put it on TV!
Sorry, but just No.
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Re: Star Trek: Omega Quest (Part 1)
someone had to go and ruin the story section didn't they
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I give it to them raw, i don't hide behind no corners.
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i wouldnt say its ruined however this particular story was rubbish no offence empire but it just wasnt good
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Well lets face, if you can't take CnC or the truth for that matter, you should't be on the Internet.
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Re: Star Trek: Omega Quest (Part 1)
some people are far too sensetive.
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